What Makes A Poem?
The question is the title.
Is it the sentiment?
The words?
The lay of lines?
The rhyme? Now unrequired?
I can say
That
This is the longest I have ever gone
Without seeing my daughter
Since the day she was born.
That knowledge hit my heart
This morning
Like the sharp quill of a feather
And became a poem.
I could
Have written
Those same words
– All these words –
In a sentence or two.
You
Would have read them
But somehow, it would not
have been the same.
Those words,
that feeling,
deserved
a poem.
Ventanas al Mar, Cozumel, Mexico.
Quote of the Day: “If you want to understand any woman you must first ask about her mother and then listen carefully. Stories about food show a strong connection. Wistful silences demonstrate unfinished business. The more a daughter knows about the details of her mother’s life – without flinching or whining – the stronger the daughter.” — Anita Diamant
Daily gratitudes:
Blooming trees
The mountains today
New travels
Lighthouses
Egg Salad Diabolo with MKL
When Mr. Man is happy to see me
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April 16, 2016 at 10:58 am
Cecilia Mary Gunther
So they did! Great rhythm and pace too.. c
April 16, 2016 at 10:56 pm
Seasweetie
Thank you, miss c!